Argument writing

Argument writing

1.5.15

GRi11

C.S.N.S

402 College street

Palmerston North

Dear Mr Kennedy

Don’t stop GRi11 kids managing our own learning, it gives us responsibility and a choice in when we do it (with a deadline).

This year has been way more fun than any other years, because I have had a choice in where and when I do things. Managing my own learning has also helped me advance in my learning, because I can do a task when I am inspired it’s hard to do something well if you don’t want to.

Stopping us from managing our own learning will also affect some of the school as well, because classes like room 12/13 are also trying something similar. If we do keep doing this and it turns out to be a good thing then it could change the way we learn.

Talk to any children in room 10/11 or 12/13 and they will say that we want to keep it going.

Other schools around the country have been trying it and getting really good results. Look at how big, successful and creative Google is and then look at their office it is very similar to our class. They have a comfortable, fun, creative space that helps them, just like our class.

So please do not stop us managing our own learning!!!!!!!

From Josh.B GRi11